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My absinthe beauty, woman of madness,
Eyes shining tearing, street level cafe.
Sanity rises, inspired cool wind,
Lips licked gleaming, heart beating ballet.

Blushing laughs dancing, secret sharing pair,
Summer nights suit us, forever love young,
Flirting hands sliding, small gestures screaming.
Many albums past, not all songs are sung.

Alto Sax jamming, nerves running cold,
Whispers hot breathing, inches like miles,
Soft careful touches, pulling tightly wild,
Moments apart screaming, seconds like trials.

Bite, claw, soft, hard, slow, fast, mad, sane, sighs, cries,
Grin, laugh, stop, start, eyes, tastes, skin, hair, hands, thighs.
We spent a night together in Toronto over the summer, with wonderful weather and my love never diminishing for my gorgeous wife ( And model, =sya ) The photograph did not turn out as it should but it still makes me think of that night, and while the thoughts were flowing I let them go onto paper. Canada happens to be one of the few places where actual absinthe can be purchased (not the lame stuff gothies buy in the states from each other) and it may in fact be the brew of madness.
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silverwingsoffire Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2006
Wow, this is amazing.
I have to be honest when I say that I have not yet seen a style in writing like yours before.
Stunning from beginning to end.

Hehehe, goot ol' Canucks.
=D
I like the reference of alto...it seems to hold together the piece quite nicely while at the same time giving this unforbidding sense of imagery. Heh, not the word I was looking for...more like unforboding? Or unforboding...forget it I'm just going to give up and assume you understand what I mean. =P
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kylere Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2006
I wrote it looking for the word you are looking for...
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silverwingsoffire Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2006
L01.
Stupendous.
=D
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wayseeker Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2005   Writer
Visceral imagery, very raw.

I import my absinthe from overseas. Costs a lot, but worth it.
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kylere Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2005
Thanks, Way, that was exactly what I intended it to be. I wanted the words to match the raw grainy edge of the photo.
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Sya Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2005  Professional General Artist
:heart: all my love
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