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Fingertips touch you
Like you touch my spirit
Fingernails strengthen touch
Like you strengthen my heart
Hands hold you close
Like your love binds me
Arms pull you near
Like your eyes, draw me in
Shoulders support you
Like you support my dreams
Chest pillows you
Like you buoy my hopes
Neck shelters you
Like you protect my love
Hair tickles you
Like you tease my eyes
Face confronts you
Like you challenge my mind
Ears hear you
Like you understand my mind
Waist anchors you
Like you hold me firm
Legs bring me to you
Like yours, wrap me close
Feet carry my body
Like your love carries my all
Skin laughs at your touch
Like your humor lightens my mood
Tears dampen your hair
Like yours, dampen my soul
Eyes stare rapt upon you
Like yours, return my gaze
Okay, no excuse for this, but love
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lost-but-found Featured By Owner May 19, 2003
Waist anchors you
Like you hold me firm
Legs bring me to you
Like yours, wrap me close
Feet carry my body
Like your love carries my all
[erotic]

Tears dampen your hair
Like yours, dampen my soul
Eyes stare rapt upon you
Like yours, return my gaze
[love & sweet]

[sigh]... yet another +fav from u... what shall we do? just keep addin on i guess. :D (Big Grin)
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Sya Featured By Owner May 19, 2003  Professional General Artist
Awww ::sigh:: + Fav

Nicely written, nice to see something that doesn't rhyme for a change of pace.... meter is right on. Very sweet!
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a-liah Featured By Owner May 19, 2003
"Arms pull you near
Like your eyes, draw me in.."

great line

love the prose

ah... love ... *sighs dreamily* - Heart
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