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Like you hold me firm
Legs bring me to you
Like yours, wrap me close
Feet carry my body
Like your love carries my all
[erotic]
Tears dampen your hair
Like yours, dampen my soul
Eyes stare rapt upon you
Like yours, return my gaze
[love & sweet]
[sigh]... yet another
Nicely written, nice to see something that doesn't rhyme for a change of pace.... meter is right on. Very sweet!
Like your eyes, draw me in.."
great line
love the prose
ah... love ... *sighs dreamily* -